day tripper

thanks!:D I'm not sure when Peyton starts Chapter 2, but I hope it's soon! I'm excited to see what she comes up with! *bounces in chair with excitement*

Haha, okay guys before you start getting thoughts from the topic description, this is a story my buddy Peyton [moon14] and I came up with. It's very intriguing actually. I ...

O: I must use this as one of my computer desktops! Hehe; I'm a big PEACE&LOVE fan and ahh! I love it, this is great!(:

You're photography style is very nice; enjoyable. 1] This has to be my favorite. The way the rocks unravel the crashing water into the easy going sea with the sailboats ...

Hey! Wow this was very nice; very unique. "You do like nice Marissa," It should be You do look nice Marissa. "...typical straight black hair, the only easy thing..." Okay, ...

Hey DW:D Okay, first thing. For your authors not you should place that in bold or else but a line under it so we know when it ends. I got ...

This is a short piece I wrote in regards to almost losing my mother. I love her with all my heart and am happy that she is safe(: Hey Mom, ...

Well, this time around I read Scasha's post and she caught every single thing that I cought. So, instead of repeating everything she wrote, I'll just tell you my over ...

It turns out the Better Aid Society is much bigger than a mod office and dorms. Every class has its own building and you had to walk about a mile ...

Hey, well I'm going to start off by saying this was really rushed. You need to take time to get a feel of your characters before writing. You need more ...

Hey! I know it's kind of late but I read this one the day you posted it and had this longgg critique and then my computer died and I lost ...

Aw I liked this chapter a lot! Once again, nothing was wrong. The bondee and bonder names were good! Creative, yes. I didn't really see anything wrong. It deff. is ...

I liked it a lot. But it does remind me of Twilight. But you know what? I'm going to go read the others and see if my mind changes(: I ...

This was very nice. I liked how you introduced it. I didn't see many grammer errors. But you used a lot of commas resulting in some run ons. Also, when ...

I'm really into modeling and photography, so I took some while visiting my cabin in the mountains! This is from when I was standing on the top/edge of the waterfall: ...